"Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" Also please don't flame me. Youre our brother! Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. And Lori and Lisa. I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! Why? Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! "But you know what's not fair?" She whistles for Fangs. I thought you were my family! Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" What kind of family would do this to one of their own? I'll never be able to play games the best way again! No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out - The Loud House Fanon Wikia So, I plan to rectify that. Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Lincoln: You know what!? I need a very big, long rest from them. I certainly am not! (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. Lincoln: Lana. Lucy: Gasp! I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? . In. Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? I was being selfish!. And he did not look happy. MY TROPHIES!!! Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? Anyway, enjoy. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. N Eddy's big picture show . * "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." Sam: Luna, I got your letter. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. "Sure thing," the voice on the other end said. User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House Lynn: FINE! Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. You tricked us in the first place. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. [The softball playoffs. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! Thats what my problem is! There's no need to shout. Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. Lynn Sr.: NO! But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Rita: Sweetie, please! She pointed to the back row of seats. Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. News flash; I live here!". Here's another Alternate Ending. They all shouted. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. "The Loud House" No Such Luck/Frog Wild (TV Episode 2017) - IMDb Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. I feel like a fool! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Journal. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. I hate pageants! Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. Whats wrong? [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Angus: Oh do tell. I just hurt Lynn! ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." My coffin. One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. Trying explaining that!" I dont want to support you psychos! Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. Lincoln: "Oh really." Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." YOU HATE US!!! ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" Luan added. Understood?!" This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. Some sisters those ghouls are. (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! Lynn: HUH!?!?! I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! They are looking very heartbroken.). The End. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. Lucy: Lincoln's right! ", Lincoln: "Thanks. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! "Good riddance." But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. And can you please unlock my room for me? Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! Taking the device out of the girl's hand. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. (facepalms. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. "SAVE IT, RITA!" As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. Luna spots Lincoln). ", Lincoln: "No. ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. No such luck alt ending5. You love baseball. Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Honey, we're back. QUIET! "Which room number is it?" White hair extended ending9. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" So expect a bill in the mail." Guess they forgot to lock the windows. The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. I'm not. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. (continues to cry. I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! Lori: WE'RE THE WORST SISTERS EVER!!!! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions.